Those planning classroom renovations should always consider potential
educational uses of advanced technologies that may occur in the
classrooms.
This sounds too vague to me. I'd prefer something like:
The planning process for classroom construction and renovation should
be modified to includes a formal phase that considers educational
technology needs and opportunities.
On medium term reccs:
Between five and ten projects should be supported annually, at a
total cost of perhaps $1M.
should be "$1M per year"
The long-term recommendations should be dropped as per Bob's
suggestion and recasted as long-term studies, incorporating some of
Dick's material.
-- Hal